Given is a figure illustrating electricity production process from Geothermal resources.
As shown in the figure, cold water as the raw material, in the first step, is pumped down from the ground into 4.5 kilometers below ground level. After this, it is can be seen that the water is injected in a horizontal way in order to be passed in Geothermal zone, consist of hot rocks, and then is preparing for the third step. Now, Hot water is pumped up to and come back to the surface of the earth from more than 4.5-kilometer depth.
The fourth stage of the electricity production process, meanwhile entails the conversion of the hot water into steam. As it is shown in the figure this conversion is undergoing by Condenser. Finally, in the fifth and final phase, Turbine is rotated and powered by steam and immediately after the rotation of turbine as a consequence generator is powered. Electricity energy is produced as a result of generator activity and in this point production of electricity take place. At last but least, electricity produced is transferred to public network electricity.
Overall, From the information supplied, it is evident that this process involving five steps, which begin with using of cold water in the first step and end up with utilizing of Turbine and Generator in the fifth and final phase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion process from Geothermal resources. As shown in the figure, cold water as th...
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... can be seen that the water is injected in a horizontal way in order to be passed in Geothermal zon...
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...th from more than 4.5-kilometer depth. The fourth stage of the electricity prod...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...conversion of the hot water into steam. As it is shown in the figure this conversi...
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...sferred to public network electricity. Overall, From the information supplied, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, third, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92410714286 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81752315036 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6013948289 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0530192582055 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222842107494 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304807188141 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283283631657 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222156203157 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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