The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram is a figure illustrating electricity production process from Geothermal energy. Overall, from the information supplied, it is evident that this process involving five steps, which begin with using of cold water in the first step and end up with utilizing of Turbine and Generator in the fifth and final phase by using Geothermal Power Plant.

As shown in the figure, cold water as the raw material, in the first step, is pumped down from the ground into 4.5 kilometers below ground level. After this, it can be seen that the water is injected in a horizontal way in order to be passed in Geothermal zone, which consists of hot rocks, and then is preparing for the third step. Hot water is now pumped up to the surface of the earth from more than 4.5-kilometer depth.

The fourth stage of the electricity production process entails the conversion of the hot water into steam. As it is shown in the figure, this conversion is undergone by Condenser. Finally, in the fifth and final phase, the Turbine is rotated and powered by steam, and immediately after the rotation of turbine as a consequence, the generator is powered. Electricity energy is produced as a result of generator activity, meaning that the production of electricity takes place.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion process from Geothermal energy. As shown in the figure, cold water as th...
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... can be seen that the water is injected in a horizontal way in order to be passed in Geothermal zon...
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... from more than 4.5-kilometer depth. The fourth stage of the electricity prod...
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...oduction of electricity takes place. Overall, from the information supplied, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, third, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75026698597 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9190458263 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0458875423282 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176585147608 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271128595113 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0268628846109 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234085998097 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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