The diagram below shows how glass containers such as bottles are produced and recycled

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The diagram below shows how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The given diagram depicts the procedure of manufacturing and recycling of glass containers. The production of glass starts from the mixture of elements whereas it's reusing process runs from the collection of used glass.

Overall, it is vivid that all the steps are compulsory to complete the production and recycling of the glass. There are 4 steps for glass production and 5 for its recycling, if one step is missed from both methods then the whole system will pause for that specific plan.

In the beginning, all the ingredients such as sand, soda ash, limestone and other elements are mixed up before melting it. In the second stage, the mixture is sent to the furnace where it is melted in approx 1500 degree celsius temperature. After this, the liquify content takes the shape of glass containers.

On the other hand, the glass reusing system starts by gathering waste bottles. Before the washing, it is sorted by colour. Following the second stage of sorting, all the impurities are removed by cleaning it in the third step. After the fourth stage of grinding and melting, ultimately, it is ready for moulding into new products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ts from the mixture of elements whereas its reusing process runs from the collectio...
^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...degree celsius temperature. After this, the liquify content takes the shape of glass contai...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Following the second stage of sorting, all the impurities are removed by cleani...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, third, whereas, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57988681384 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1541494205 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133801590339 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538752604627 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600782028033 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828902643036 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541029190843 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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