The diagrams show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.
The first flow diagram illustrates the process of glass container production, and the second
diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used glass.
We can see that glass is made using three main raw materials, and that the manufacturing process
consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn used glass into new glass products.
At the first stage in the production of glass, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are
mixed together. Next, this mixture is heated in a glass furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce
molten glass. The molten glass can then be shaped, by blowing, to create the end products,
namely glass containers.
Glass recycling begins with the collection of used glass products. The collected glass is sorted
according to its colour, and then washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of
recycling, the glass is crushed and melted, and the resulting molten glass can finally be moulded to
create new items.
- Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability while others think we should educate all students together Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Topic Today different types of robots are developed which are good friends to us and help us both at home and work Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Young people learn good behavior more from movies and books than real life experiences To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15337423313 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58712463865 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8058636006 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274595285747 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125385245409 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901017437482 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122334910691 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884066876015 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.