The process manifests how to ready-cooked noodles are manufactured in numerous factories.
At the first stage, the flour which is in the lorry, is pumped into tower silos to storage. Next, this flour is blended with some ingredients such as water and oil by the mixer- special mechine. Then, the mixture is rolled to dough sheet by the rollers and cut into appropriate strips (long and diminutive), which are the readinesses for forms of the noodles discs.
The following step is to cook the discs with oil and wait for them to desiccated. Following this, these are numerous cups as receptacles where discs noodles, some pockets of vegetables and spices are laid. The manner ends with packaging. At this moment, some labels, seals are adhered around these cups.
Overview, the transaction emcompasses eight steps, beginning with taking the flour in the truck to mix and completing with gluing trademarks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1744966443 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936156902 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.554434822 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0512198019413 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226983187722 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436749333357 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440965996984 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561924236856 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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