The picture gives information about the production process of instant noodles. Overall, there are eight steps in manufacturing instant noodles, starting from transferring the raw material to storage silos and ending with labeling and sealing.
The process commences by pumping flour from the truck to the silos, subsequently, the powder will be mixed with water and oil in a mixer machine. The substance then will be placed on rollers to laminate properly before experiencing a procedure of sheeting and stripping respectively to create the initial form of noodles.
The process continues with rolling the noodles into noodle discs and dipping them into the boiled oil. Water in noodles is also dehydrated in the same step to receive the most effective result. These newly-produced noodle discs will be put into cups, together with vegetables and spices. Finally, the cups of noodles are labeled and sealed carefully before being sold to the customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to create the initial form of noodles. The process continues with rolling the nood...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33774834437 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75919822788 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8368967476 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886783402004 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422256621196 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304411483871 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590161824984 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429057277966 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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