The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
(Cambridge 15 test 3)
The dipicted image illustrates the process of producing noodles cups. It combines eight stages, begginning with storage of flour and ending with labelling and packaging those cups.
Generally, instant noodles - manufacturing involves eight steps, starting with flour is kept in silos and finishing with branding.
At the start of the process, flour is transported by truck to the silos. Secondly, it is mixed with water and oil. That mixture is dough uused to make noodles. Then, dough goes through rollers to create sheets. Nextly, those sheets of it are cut into strps by the machines.
Subsequently, discs of noodles are cooked into hot oil. After being fried, they are dried so that the water evaporates, leaving the desicated noodles. Seventhly, discs of noodles are put into two lines of cups. Then, they are filled with dried vegetables and seasonings. Finally, those noodles cups are labelled and sealed before prodducts will be distributed to retailers and customers.
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... labelling and packaging those cups. Generally, instant noodles - manufacturi...
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...n silos and finishing with branding. At the start of the process, flour is tr...
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... are cut into strps by the machines. Subsequently, discs of noodles are cooke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3141025641 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63426430949 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9352590506 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0677623182996 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236698599137 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284169107961 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044664940354 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276751996853 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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