the diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
The diagram depicts the production of orange juice.
At first glance, it is clear that there are various stages in the process of manufaturing orange juice, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and ending with delivering products to shops.
Firstly, oranges are loaded onto trucks and delivered to the factory where they are washed by machines. Then, the juice will be extracted from oranges by squeezing machines. At this stage, solid waste are collected to feed animal, while the fresh juice can either be packaged and distributed to shops, or again loaded onto refrigerator trucks and transferred to another factory for the evaporation process. During the evaporation stage, the fresh orange juice will be processed by evaporator machines where the water is removed. The concentrated juice will then be canned and transported to a warehouse before being combined with water again in another factory. After that, it will be packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased by consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36477987421 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78432439265 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2693022438 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149375153572 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862087340404 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615005728193 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132166107354 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530166217924 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.