The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity.
the provided diagram depicts the way by which electricity is harnessed from water power. As illustrated, four stages are required to produce hydroelectric energy.
In the beginning of the process, the collected water in the reservoir is passed through an intake structure into the the dam and raised by it to create falling water. In the next stage, falling water is regulated and flowed down through sluice gate to a turbine.The pressure the water flow creates, trigger the turbine to spin and thereby the potential energy of falling water is converted to mechanical energy.Then, as a result of the turbine spinning, the generator is also activated as it is connected to the turbine which lead to turning of the produced mechanical energy into hydroelectricity and the remaining water is released . Finally, as the newly produced current voltage is high, it is carried out to a substation transformer in order to reduce its voltage to 220-240 volts and after that it is supplied to different places.
In the summary, it can be seen that the procedure begins with the trapped water in the reservoir and ends with the transfer of power to its various destinations via transmission lines
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages? 89
- The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity 53
- The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity. 78
- The diagram below shows changes to one university campus. 78
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...passed through an intake structure into the the dam and raised by it to create falling ...
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...passed through an intake structure into the the dam and raised by it to create falling ...
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...d down through sluice gate to a turbine.The pressure the water flow creates, trigge...
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...water is converted to mechanical energy.Then, as a result of the turbine spinning, t...
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...city and the remaining water is released . Finally, as the newly produced current ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04568527919 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9110718564 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.295390897 43.030603864 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166089790063 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776285482809 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656262999788 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110699197972 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256179835967 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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