The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied diagram illustrates components of a solar panel as well as two different models which can be used in converting sunlight into heat air or heat water. In general, the main parts of a solar panel consist of box with an inlet placed on the opposite side of an outlet. Moreover, a transparent glass covers the top and allows sun rays to pass through, into the inner space.
It is readily apparent that the heat inside the box will be trapped, therefore, cool air can easily be warmed after it enters the inlet and makes contact with the hot environment within, resultantly, warm air will exit via the outlet.
As clearly seen, in order to produce heat water, a water pipe is required to connect the inlet and the outlet under the see-through roof of the box. Noticeably, as cool water travels along the pipe, it will obviously be heated up by high temperature produced by the solar power. Warm water is expected to be the outcome of the process. Due to the complete usage of natural energy, solar panel is an effective contraption to save electricity for domestic use.
- The issue of gay marriage remains controversial Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage Should gay marriage be legal 73
- Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your 89
- Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time doing physical activities 61
- Writing task 2 Some old customs and traditions are not useful presently so should be given up To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to pass through, into the inner space. It is readily apparent that the heat ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66492146597 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54215305307 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2078831728 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143548068619 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064778556924 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631642343156 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944796983579 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028886260232 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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