The diagram below shows information about quartely profit for three companies of united states from 2005 to 2007.
The given line graph provides information on billions of dollars earned per quarter by microsoft, IBM and Apple from 2005 to 2007.
Firstly, Microsoft earned nearly USD 2.8 Billion inQ1 2005 followed by a steady rise till second quarter of 2006 and the income reached to 3.5 billion.It fluctuated for the next four quarters and then rose sharply to reach the high of 4.2 billionin Q3 07 followed by a slight dip to 3.8 billion in Q4 07.
Secondly, IBM revenues stood lowest at 0.5 billion. However, it increased and remained range boundaround 1 billion for the next four quarters. Then it showed phenomenal jump to 3 billion in Q2 06 follwed by a sharp fall to 1.8 billion. After staying in the same range for the next three quarters, it again shot up to the peak of 3.5 billion in Q2 07. In the end, it fluctuated and closed at 2.5 in Q4 07.
Thirdly, apple started at 0.7 billion and grew steadily to reach 2.5 billion inQ1 07 and then showed smart jumps in the following quarters and reached to the highest at 3.9 billion.
Finally, all the companies witnessed rise in their profits, however apple was an obvious outerperformer over its peers in the graph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...6 and the income reached to 3.5 billion.It fluctuated for the next four quarters a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63461538462 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51849666345 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2516379963 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937325942017 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441584412745 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427824900395 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061207085416 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460193851249 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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