The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generation for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is true that many older people believe in traditional value that often seen incompatible with the needs of younger people.It is highly debated issue as to whether the growth of new generation by replacing tradition period is blessing or curse.I strongly agree with this notion due to some reasons.
A careful analysis shows that the most important reasons why primitive period ideas are not helpful because traditional thinking restrict to live in nuclear family and it does not help people to become independent. Secondaly, traditional roles of men and women as bread winner they always dominated women due to this, women donot participated in outside work such as jobs.But this trend is not accepted in modern era for instance, hindstan times conducted a survey and realize that the 80% women do work as like to men and gain fame and fortune also, they achieve independence.
Moreover, young adults choose their life partner and decide when to marry which contradicts with old tradition By choosing life partnerwith own desire it brings lots of happiness and satisfactionThis opportunity is not available intraditional period .Also, fixed roles of men and women which are no longer exit because, nowdays women participated in all kind ofactivities which provide gender equality.
In conclusion, with changing of time elders should also modify themselves with youngsters and should cooperate with them because majority of the ideas of tradition period no longer exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30638297872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79869335094 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1951921688 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.4 106.682146367 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 20.7667163134 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180085025312 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981780885475 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604040526413 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100574231098 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504515009032 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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