The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The process chart represents the honey bees stages of life. The maturation time of honey bee was around to 1 month and 4 to 5 days.
Overall, it can be manifested that the six stages of life span and it is a continuous process which completed within approximately 5 weeks.
First of all, every 3 days 1 or 2 eggs lay by the female honey bee. Which hatch about to nine to ten days later. Furthermore, adding 5 days to hatching the bee trying to survive and after two days of it they survive willingly but the size of bees was quite small and imparted with lack of typical stripes.
Moreover, around 3 weeks later the nymph mould thrice to grow where the growth was continuous throughout the lifespan and emerge young adult bee. Which has big size and dark Strips over back. Around two couple of day later it fully matured when they able to give new lays every 72 hours and the process remains constant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... or 2 eggs lay by the female honey bee. Which hatch about to nine to ten days later. ...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'couple' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'couples'.
Suggestion: couples
...e and dark Strips over back. Around two couple of day later it fully matured when they...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45508982036 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32851762602 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0609505047 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111856332111 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545604773642 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520592697826 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076404420382 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548010312461 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.