The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram indicates the life period of an insect known as the honey bee.
Overall, It can be identified that the total duration of a honey bee is around 34 to 36 days.
The report of its life i.e from layings till a mature bee there are a total of six steps involved. Firstly, A mature bee reproduces one or two eggs every third day. Further, the eggs are hatched by the females for ten days; after that, In five days an infant is born. After seven of birth, it starts learning its skills and when nine days passed the bee is ready to deal with the world and from there the struggle for honey starts.
At the same time, the bee starts getting mature and within four days they reach their maturity. And again the cycle starts, the same bees who were not born before 36 days, start producing eggs and contributing to their population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...m layings till a mature bee there are a total of six steps involved. Firstly, A matur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4358974359 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.094967515 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6563652527 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129510636653 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620099246823 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404695186705 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849892127699 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377812502623 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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