The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the honey bee's life process. Overall, it can be seen that the life cycle consists of six main stages, and it takes thirty four to thirty six days to be completed.
To begin with, the life cycle of a honey bee starts when the females lay one to two eggs each three days and this is the first stage. After 9-10 days which is the second stage, the eggs usually are hatched.
Then, the baby honey bee that is called nymph is born. It takes 21 days untill the young adult is emerged. During this period, which is the third, fourth, and fifth stages, the nymph moults 3 times while the growing period, also, its size is getting bigger. The last phase takes four days when the young honey bee is turned into a mature bees. In general, the life-circle of a honey bee takes almost 35 days and this is how its life continues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bees'' or 'bee's'?
Suggestion: bees'; bee's
The given graph illustrates the honey bees life process. Overall, it can be seen t...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'bee'?
Suggestion: bee
...young honey bee is turned into a mature bees. In general, the life-circle of a honey...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, third, while, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34591194969 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93788271649 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9663766164 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115851099901 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547382091586 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430267434573 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828199929661 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158571217309 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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