Essay topics:
The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon.
The diagram reveals stages of life circulation of the salmon.
At the very beginning, the eggs of salmon are in fresh water and hatch for about 3 months. Then they grow up and for several weeks feeds off yolk-sac. Then after 5-10 weeks they take the form of fish and swim they are called fry. After several months, the fish grow up and develops finger markings and they identified as parr. After 1-3 years, salmon, which takes on the name smolt will group and swim out to sea. After 8 years, the sea salmon becomes adult. After that, he goes to the spawning adult stage and dies in the interval of 2 weeks.
Overall, diagram consists of 7 stages and illustrates every point of salmon's life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e smolt will group and swim out to sea. After 8 years, the sea salmon becomes adult. ...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 8 years, the sea salmon becomes adult. After that, he goes to the spawning adult sta...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 577.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54330708661 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09546481286 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.4841862117 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1111111111 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168550850784 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892202970129 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114584683725 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212295512989 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116632357536 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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