The bar graph gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010.
The bar graph presents information on books that were borrowed at the Lammertown Library in 1991 and 2001.
Books in the style of crime and children's fiction show a decrease in the number of borrowing. If in 1991 about 450 crime books were taken, then by 2001 this number was about 200. And books in the style of children's fiction decreased from about 650 to about 390.
However, all other genres of books have experienced a boost. Self improvement books grew to about 990 before 2001, although they were only 200 in 1991. Language books also increased in borrowing numbers and by 200 were 2001, and about 80 in 1991. Demand for thrillers also increased from about 600, they rose to 800. The highest need was for romance. By 2001, they were 1,400. And only autobiographies remained the same- about 400.
- The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years 90
- More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative? 73
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. 67
- The bar graph gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010. 67
- Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40070660088 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9647685633 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8181818182 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339466737974 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131430170099 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116669833261 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274806532482 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111991960698 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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