The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from suagr cane.
The diagram gives information about the steps involved in making sugar from sugar cane.
In general, there are seven steps in total, starting with growing sugar cane, and ending with plain sugar. It can be seen that the production of sugar is both by hand and by machines.
At the beginning of the process, farmers grow sugar cane until they are mature enough to produce sugar, at least 12-18 months. The next step is that sugarcane is harvested in one of two ways. Both are manually gathered by a small knife and collected by means of a tractor.
After that, sugar cane is put in the crushing machine to separate fresh juice from sugar-cane dregs before being purified through limestone. Sugar juice turns to syrup by being heated in an evaporator. Then, the syrup undergoes a process of centrifugation to separate sugar crystals. Finally, sugar is cooled and dried in some kind of vats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cooled and dried in some kind of vats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, at least, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43169463733 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6690832238 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289963672793 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110855595452 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098088676022 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1975178408 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091779586062 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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