The diagram below shows the natural water purification system.
It is observed from pictorial representation about the information of natural water purification system. This process is divided into different stages, which is clearly and coherently represented and all these stages are performed in the chronological order.
It is crystal clear that the process takes place with the assistance of sun. There are three stones which are placed on the trench. The trench is kept on the mud. Also, there are two plants and container in pure water is contained, which are in the trench.
Firstly, Sun light falls upon the stones, which are upon the plastic sheet. Then, with the heat of sunlight the stones become hot, which create water. Next, this water condensed and flows into the trench. Afterwards, transpiration takes place with the help of plants. At last, condensed water converted into pure water and falls into the container.
Overall, it is evident that condensation and transpiration play part and parcel role in this process. Moreover, Sun also plays crucial role for providing heat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20958083832 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66922170734 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4692699235 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9230769231 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134682873162 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491613842739 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864659625008 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791195245902 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702655905426 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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