The diagram below shows the process chart by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process chart by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The process chart illustret the informaction about bricks manufacturing eventhough it depicts the six major steps all are play significant role in manufacturing.

Overall, it can be seen that which main part in production of bricks. In this process they not skip any step.

Firstly, the row material such as clay collect th

rough the digger withthe help of workers. After collecting clay put on the metal grid and then roller. Next step is sand and water mixed with it and put in mould or cut the bricks by wire cutter. Fourth step is send to drying oven for total two days and put in kiln for moderate or in high temprature. Total three days it send to cooling chamber. The last part is packaging or delivery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rough
... row material such as clay collect th rough the digger withthe help of workers. Aft...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting clay put on the metal grid and then roller. Next step is sand and water mixe...
^^
Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sends'?
Suggestion: sends
...in high temprature. Total three days it send to cooling chamber. The last part is pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 591.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65354330709 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5423683697 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724409448819 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 169.2 283.868780488 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4268009867 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148200921574 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046737319488 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054254971585 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798980329976 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062525690456 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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