The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The process chart illustrate the information about bricks manufacturing even though it depicts the six major steps all are play significant role in manufacturing.

Overall, it can be seen that which main steps using production of bricks. In this process they not skip any step.

Firstly, the row material such as clay collect through the digger with the help of workers. After collecting clay put on the metal grid and then roller. Next step sand and water mixed with it and put in mould or cut the bricks by wire cutter. Fourth step bricks send to drying oven for total two days and put in kiln for moderate or in high temperature. Total three days it send to cooling chamber. The last part is packaging or delivery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sends'?
Suggestion: sends
...n high temperature. Total three days it send to cooling chamber. The last part is pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68503937008 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48037745203 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724409448819 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8270919962 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1111111111 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145826343874 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475585625673 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500979926413 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955467928759 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230555458507 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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