The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The pictures illustrate a detailed description of how plastic bottles are recycled.
In general, the procedure for recycling goes through 9 steps, beginning with the plastic bottles being put in the right trash bin and culminating with the products being produced.
The process commences when plastic bottles are put in the right trash bin, which can be recyclable before the trash truck carry off the trash bin for recycling. following this, the trash truck pours the plastic bottles into the trunk so that delivering to a recycling center. Once this particular stage has been completed, the plastic bottles are sorted into the box, which is classified already, and then shipped to a compressing into blocks full of plastic bottles around them, being continued to take these things to a crusher.
At the crusher, the cube of plastic bottles is crushed and converted into plastic pellets which will wash in the pond. Next, the plastic pellets are produced and transformed into heating pellets to form raw material after that they are starting packaged and stacked on a shelf. Eventually, when the raw material is prepared that makes the producing end products such as clothes, bottles, etc. it will be delivered to consumers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ating with the products being produced. The process commences when plastic bottl...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
... carry off the trash bin for recycling. following this, the trash truck pours the plastic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1144278607 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57191315152 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9980121029 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274832203585 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114514685841 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742165290635 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167277507921 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059221161349 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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