The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The chart shows the process by which plastic bottles are recycled.
Overall, there are several nine stages in the process of making plastic products, beginning with the collection of bottles and ending with the end product being produced.
Initially, plastic bottles are collected from the reuse garbage can in all the residential areas, before a specialized rubbish truck transports them to the recycling centre. After that, bottles are put through a roller to be sorted by hand, followed by compressing them into equal square blocks. Then, makers transfer them to the middle of two cogwheels so they are crushed into small pieces, and these pieces are cleaned with water.
At the following stage, the cleaned chunks are made into plastic pellets, while the high temperature heats them to become raw material. Once the heating process has finished, the mixture of plastic is packaged and then delivered to create the final products, ranging from water bottles, and containers to clothes and pencils. At this point, a cycle has been completed and a new cycle will begin.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lly, plastic bottles are collected from the reuse garbage can in all the residential area...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13714285714 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45199460665 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0871210456 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219595690063 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102993921426 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11203076846 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170398420662 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115545831905 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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