The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the process of brick manufacturing in seven steps which is used for construction purpose.
Overall, from the picture it is clear that clay, sand, water and heat is used as raw materials to manufacture bricks which is used in construction of buildings in a seven steps process.
First, a digger is utilized to dig clay out of the earth. Then this clay is separated in to fine particles by using through a metal grip and fall over a roller. Further FINE CLAY IS mixed with the sand and water to form into a semi-solid material. This is then molded using mould's or cut by wire cutters in to rectangular shape bricks. Theses are then are stored in a dry oven for 24 to 48 hours. Later on they are placed in a kiln at moderate temperature ( 200 to 980 degree). After which the temperature is raised to higher at about 870 to 1300 degrees. Following this, the brick are cooled in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours. They are then packed and delivered using trucks.
- Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.Do you agree or disagree ? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is used for construction purpose. Overall, from the picture it is clear th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...gh a metal grip and fall over a roller. Further FINE CLAY IS mixed with the sand and wa...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...placed in a kiln at moderate temperature 200 to 980 degree. After which the tempe...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oderate temperature 200 to 980 degree. After which the temperature is raised to high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50549450549 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55172312505 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8585374875 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128304664434 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046594337575 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714753744731 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136569274874 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782317350183 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.