In many countries, plastic bags are one of the main sources of damage to the environment, and so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The prime cause of environmental damage arises from the use of plastic bags in lots of nations, and hence polythene carry bags has to be banned. I totally agree to this notion as plastic bag are a major source of pollution in river water, oceans, air and soil. Many of the diseases such as cancers are now attributed to various chemicals present in plastics substances.
Firstly, pollution is a major issues today, and plastics can harm the nature by contaminating our water sources such as rivers. Moreover, marine life is also destroyed when water from the land containing plastic waste enters the sea. People who do not know the importance of proper recycling of waste tend to burn them, which eventually leads to the release of dangerous fumes in to the atmosphere thus decreasing the quality of the air that we breath. Not even earth is spared by the carry bags which are burried by some as a method of disposal, ultimately burried plastic can prevent water from the surface to enter the deep soil and can cause flooding and ground water scarcity.
Secondly, health of the citizens in theses countries is jeopardized by all the above ways of pollution that the plastic produces. In the manufacturing and disposal of plastic materials will produce a myriad of artificial chemical substance, when human beings and animals exposed to them can develope a plethora of tumours and diseases which are life threatening. Therefore, plastic is a menace and should be banned.
To end, plastic produces various types of pollution and consequently it creates illness among the people. I strongly agree to the idea of banning plastic by many countries in a move to combat environmental damage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96478873239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71685905968 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4071584342 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226146246202 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923267397399 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742603973925 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14669554311 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692008915275 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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