The rendered diagram delineates the acquaintance with regard to the generation of electricity by means of adopting a well known system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion.
To embark with, the first and primary step is initiated through warm seawater where solar energy helps to convert it into water vapour. There are two ways to come across warm as well as cold seawater with the aid of small long tunnel which is attached by two long square type chamber.This step is followed by evaporation chamber that is help to get evacuated along with, sea water which make it warm by dint of solar energy which is converted in the form of salt.Subsequently,electricity is created by turbine which plays pivotal role to make it successful.
Furthermore,a long tube can be seen by flowing water ,attached with another chamber where the cold water is condensed which directly comes from sea.Interestingly, the two extra tunnel is also connected with this same container,helps to emit salt water and at the opposite side, drinking water comes out to take.
Laconically,all illustration demonstration that all steps play imperative role to accomplish this process.If any stage is miss, all procedure will be halted
- The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ich make it warm by dint of solar energy which is converted in the form of salt.S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22564102564 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38226802828 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.091961559 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.8 112.824112599 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 22.9334400587 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656658128836 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522748642261 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797849787444 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601767725268 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875028404843 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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