A segment of community opines that robots are immensely pivotal for the progression of mankind's future, while others contend that they leave detrimental ramifications on society as well as too much dangerous. I intend to delve both arguments and confer my perspectives which i would like to explicate in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are numerous reasons why robots are very instrumental for masses development. First and foremost, in this contemporary era, no one is perfect to execute any work in ideal way, this is the reason that they have become imperative every sphere of life such as hospital where normally operations are done by them. Also, in myriad developing countries, robots are used to prepare delicious food and serve it to customers an account of faster service without any hindrances. Second contributing factor is that it is not only assist to save quality time but also secure money as a result, time may be utilized in another sectors to imbibe other skills such as communication , other useful things for example painting, sports which aid to remain healthy and feel relax.
On the other hand, there are a host of deleterious impacts on society in terms of lethargic lifestyle because in present scenario, everyone is engaged in their office, household chores and other activities and they do not have adequate time to do work by themselves thus, they are totally depends on them to accomplish for everything. Apart from that, they are going to fall prey of many health diseases as obesity, back pain for not doing physical work. To add to it, denizens can not count on them because they are just machine, all types of functional programs are installed by scientists and all things are done with help of robot's brain. So, they are unsafe for all mankind.
Having a myopic outlook, i would like to infer that admittedly, all the reasonable evidence in the favor of this advance technology, but the downside cannot be overlooked in terms of health, security and so on.
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What do you want to tell me
What do you want to tell me about "I" in the introduction actually , I did not catch it.
I_LOWERCASE means you need to
I_LOWERCASE means you need to use 'I' instead of 'i'
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...uments and confer my perspectives which i would like to explicate in forthcoming ...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mbibe other skills such as communication , other useful things for example paintin...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...elax. On the other hand, there are a host of deleterious impacts on society in te...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll mankind. Having a myopic outlook, i would like to infer that admittedly, al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9821958457 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72259606317 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632047477745 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9031098321 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.636363636 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118115777048 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447599896277 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245247478539 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641051122949 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256320702428 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.