This diagram illustrates easy way of transforming dirty water to clean by using barrels, drum, pipe and taps.
Firstly, barrel and drum should be replaced near and barrel is higher than drum to flow water through the pipe. The pipe connects barrel and drum and beginning part of this tube is replaced to the bottom of barrel and ending part of the pipe is is fixed into the drum. Sand , charcoal and gravel are replaced to lower part than the middle inside of barrel. In the end, tap is fixed to the lowest part of storage drum.
The first part of this structure recives dirty water and passes it through the filter. Filter is consists of sand, charcoal and gravel. Garvel should be replaced in the lowest part of barrel. Charcoal is above the gravel and after charcoal comes sand. Also, there is a plastic lid to shut this barrel.
The second part of water-filter assembly recives the water runs through the filter and it comes out through the tap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15007537468 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1363324604 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138078128761 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577834519795 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797138227198 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121974748478 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758591729627 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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