The diagram illustrates the procedure used in cement in production of concrete. Overall, it is clear that there are complex steps involved in cement production while that of concrete requires three main stages, beginning with the insert of cement and ending with mixing of concrete.
In cement production, the first stage of the process is adding limestone and clay, which are crushed and mixed. At the next stage, the mixture is shuddered into powder through a mixer where it is then circulated and heated in the rotating heater. Then it is grinded into powder called cement. Subsequently, it is distributed in bags.
Turning to look at the steps on producing concrete, 15% of cement and 10% of water are added into the mixture of sand and gravel, which constitutes of 25% and 50% respectively. All the sediments are then rotated thoroughly in the concrete mixer. When it is mixed well concrete is produced.
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. 61
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 84
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. 56
- Children today are too dependent on computersand electronic entertainment. It would be better toencourage them to spend more time outsideplaying sports and games. Do you agree ordisagree with this statement? Give your opinion. 78
- The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...o the mixture of sand and gravel, which constitutes of 25% and 50% respectively. All the sedim...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tated thoroughly in the concrete mixer. When it is mixed well concrete is produced. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99346405229 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69131883302 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5641774698 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198866437218 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782658356809 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567903401526 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127879620791 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415000163444 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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