Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by Ml980510 on Tue, 06/12/2018 - 02:24

Whether or not it is required to pay taxes that support universal education, for families who do not send their children to government-financed schools, is a controversial issue nowadays. In my view this is not required, and I believe that tax paying should not be taken to make it appropriate.

In cases like wealthy families have always wish to offer their children a good school. These kids enjoy proper conditions and treatments at school. They are provided with individual learning. So, when people are affordable to costly private colleges, it is certainly acceptable for them to avoid extra taxes payment of local schools, which cannot give these benefits.

However, having said this, it must be admitted that what parents pay for is for teachers’ teaching to students. They are the one who provide all patience and learning. Salaries should be paid to them, let alone the salaries to private school teachers. It is considered as unfair treatment to them. The only payback for them is taxes, which parents must be required to pay.

In conclusion, I believe that parents are not required to pay taxes, but on the other hand, I can sympathise with the situation of the teachers and I do believe that taxes should be paid to them as a reward to them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not it is required to pay taxes that suppor...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'wished'.
Suggestion: wished
...cases like wealthy families have always wish to offer their children a good school. ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91162790698 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8349438153 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9778602068 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343297628444 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110986408088 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118059998394 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21984982019 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1445984088 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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