This diagram shows the different steps involved in the making of a matchstick. Products used in the making of matches are a wood log, Ammonium phosphate, paraffin wax and chemicals whereas it involves following types of equipment, i.e. peeler, chopper, tanks, dryer, hopper, blower, metal duct, storage area, rolling belt and packaging area.
Overall, the process of making matches includes steps like peeling, chopping, preparation, drying, storing, chemical treatment and then packaging.
First, a wood log is being peeled using blade creating veneer which is then moved to chopper where it is chopped into small sticks. These sticks will then be submerged into ammonium phosphate tank followed by drying in the dryer.
In the next stage, these sticks will be passed on to a hopper from there it will be moved to the storage area through a metal duct with the help of a blower. These matches will then move to inserter from where their tip will be dipped into paraffin wax tank, based chemical tank and tip chemical tank. After the chemical treatment, these matches will be dried in a dryer and then finally reached to the packaging area where it will be packed.
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 72
- Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. 67
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hopper
...ments i.e. peeler, chopper, tanks, dryer,hopper,blower, metal duct, storage area, rolli...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...e it will be chopped into small sticks. these sticks will then be submerged into ammo...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ugh metal duct with the help on blower. these matches will then pass to inserter from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22033898305 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54993226445 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3100338957 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881431855542 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530443100861 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063339826561 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698093341873 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617850606721 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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