This graph illustrates that tooth decay may result due to consumption of sweet food which releases acid in the mouth. High acid level is inversely propotional to pH values. In graph we are comparing acidic level in 3 products i.e. Fruit sugar, cane sugar and Honey. 5.5 is the pH value below which tooth decay occurs. Unit is measured in Minutes.
Overall, Can sugar is the most acidic product and take the longest time to neutralize whereas Honey is the least acidic product and reach safe pH level in the short period of time.
Moment the Can sugar being eaten, its pH values reduces to 3.5 from 7 in time of 5 minutes whereas for fruit sugar it reduces to approx 4.25 and approx 4.75 for Honey. During this Time Tooth decay occurs as pH value is below 5.5.
Post 15min, Honey retain pH >5.5 and become nuetral in 25 mins whereas Fruit crosses pH 5.5 in 20mins and become neutral in approx 33mins. Can sugar remain acidic for the most time and reached to pH 5.5 post 30mins and become neutral in 40mins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... pH level in the short period of time. Moment the Can sugar being eaten, its pH...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51630434783 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05833377977 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4207810143 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322646121093 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160376542518 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769445372816 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201599771952 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108383119225 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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