The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in spending time watching television per week in six different age groups by both females and males over a 5-year period from 1990 to 1995.
In general, the graph shows that people in the 65 and above group spent more time on watching TV than any other group.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that both sexes watched a little over 35 hours per week in 1999 in the oldest age group. In contrast, the 4- to 15-year-old girls in 1995 and their counterparts in the 16- to 24-year-old age group in 1999 watched the least, with slightly less than 17,5 hours each. The biggest differences between genders in any age group were in the second-oldest age group, where an approximate 17.5 hours were recorded for males and a little over 22.5 for the opposite gender in 1999. There were only two age groups where both sexes experienced an increase in viewing time: those in the third and second oldest age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, third, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62285714286 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34546196659 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.9565677478 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190221497947 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104589289501 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224477616511 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132079135026 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271036289182 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.