The given picture illustrates the process of water circulation, how the water moves from the ocean to the land and come back.
The cycle has three major stages, starting with the evaporation of water in the beach and ending with soaking into the layers of soil or flowing on the surface before returning the ocean.
The first step is the natural process, which brings water between the ocean and the continent. By the heat of the sun, water will be evaporated to become water vapor, approximate 80% of them in the air are contributed by the ocean. Because of the light weight of them, they fly to the highest height before meeting cool air and being condensed to formate the big mass cloudy.
The next step is the rain in the mainland. The wind blows frequently from the ocean to the land, therefore, the result is to bring the clouds, which are in their road to become more and more paramount, when they arrive the continent, they can not contain water, which falls down the surface, called the rain.
The last step is the process of water, which goes back to the ocean. After it has rained, water has a range of situations, some of them will be at the top of the mountain to become the snow and stay there forever. A different way they build the lakes or the rivers, though water in here can soak into the layer of soil but not over impervious layers and flow under surface like groundwater. Furthermore, if the amount of water is enough to much, they will run on the surface like runoff. Finally, water will mix with salt water, which has the intrusion at the seaside, before turn round the ocean.
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagram shows how fruit is canned.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 73
- The diagram shows how fruit is canned.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he surface before returning the ocean. The first step is the natural process, whic...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: LIGHT_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lightweight'?
Suggestion: lightweight
...ontributed by the ocean. Because of the light weight of them, they fly to the highest height...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lls down the surface, called the rain. The last step is the process of water, whic...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...rmore, if the amount of water is enough to much, they will run on the surface like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 291.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51546391753 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24504640182 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6016170754 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216644198617 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954851548262 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516694479716 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126613061329 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462885257071 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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