The given picture illustrates the process of water circulation, how the water moves from the ocean to the land and come back.
The cycle has three major stages, starting with the evaporation of water in the beach and ending with soaking into the layers of soil or flowing on the surface before returning the ocean.
The first step is the natural process, which brings water between the ocean and the continent. By the heat of the sun, water will be evaporated to become water vapor, approximate 80% of them in the air are contributed by the ocean. Because of the lightweight of them, they fly to the highest height before meeting cool air and being condensed to formate the big mass cloudy.
The next stage is the rain in the mainland. The wind blows frequently from the ocean to the land, therefore, the result is to bring the clouds, which are in their road to become more and more paramount, when they arrive the continent, they can not contain water, which falls down the surface.
The ending step is the process of water, which goes back to the ocean. After it has rained, water has a range of situations, some of them will be at the top of the mountain to become the snow and stay there forever. A different way they build the lakes or the rivers, though, water in here can soak into the layer of soil but not over impervious layers and flow under surface like groundwater. Furthermore, if the amount of water is enough too much, they will run on the surface like runoff. Finally, water will mix with salt water, which has the intrusion at the seaside, before turning the ocean.
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 73
- Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages. 93
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. 84
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he surface before returning the ocean. The first step is the natural process, whic...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n water, which falls down the surface. The ending step is the process of water, wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55594405594 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29721344102 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520979020979 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1556284257 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218473477492 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957436280087 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521734896372 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127716711047 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454468439693 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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