The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which bricks are made for the building industry. Overall, there are seven stages in the process, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery.
To begin, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This clay is then placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the clay into smaller pieces. A roller assists in this process.
Following this, sand and water are added to the clay, and this mixture is turned into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter. Next, these bricks are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours.
In the subsequent stage, the bricks go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 – 3 days. Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to their destinations.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 73
- The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. 78
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- Some people think that studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213197969543 0.268076937826 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.187817258883 0.116061578633 162% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0507614213198 0.0759168565197 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0152284263959 0.0366838410393 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0152284263959 0.0131127313244 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126903553299 0.155750635184 81% => OK
Participles: 0.10152284264 0.0379272487307 268% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.36055447603 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355329949239 0.0210936926555 168% => OK
Particles: 0.010152284264 0.00175180941692 580% => OK
Determiners: 0.157360406091 0.0948980150116 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010152284264 0.00967000014798 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 949.0 1161.00487805 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.9 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3615819209 5.90752243213 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299435028249 0.337110787985 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19209039548 0.247514529752 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.101694915254 0.171178102325 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0508474576271 0.112407865282 45% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.36055447603 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 52.0307625863 49.3433353143 105% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1343327045 42.9750493124 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 135.714022679 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.689975730869 29% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 36.909039548 47.7609492067 77% => OK
Elegance: 2.02325581395 2.94281807926 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475003048998 0.418131533498 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140767129031 0.181151798455 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0802270603526 0.0850326197045 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.635763350734 0.706616315825 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172944151354 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232720234518 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14431348277 0.108899403657 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291228739144 0.367819155151 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0146334550015 0.0812612215331 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326273270562 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792461034362 0.0921553760075 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.08536585366 245% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.