The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams illustrate the process of cements and concrete in order to build a building.
Overall, limestone and clay are the main foundations for the cements productions. This can be created by passing through four stages before being bagged ready for use and which final product of cements then also is used for the concrete productions by pouring 15% of cements with other four materials.
Looking in details, the cement production can be divided into four processes. To begin with, limestone and clay are crushing into a crusher to form a powder and this mixture then passed onto the rotating heating cylinder by passing the mixing processes. Then this will be placed onto the grinder after heated at the cylinder and ready to be bagged as cement.
In terms of concrete production, it requires the combination of four materials to be poured into a concrete mixer and those materials are; 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravels.
- The diagram below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. 78
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 78
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 78
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? 78
- Some people think that we do not need to print papers newspapers anymore. Do you agree or disagree? 45
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inder and ready to be bagged as cement. In terms of concrete production, it requ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286516853933 0.268076937826 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.174157303371 0.116061578633 150% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0337078651685 0.0759168565197 44% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0224719101124 0.0366838410393 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00561797752809 0.0131127313244 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14606741573 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0842696629213 0.0379272487307 222% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.56191863251 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280898876404 0.0210936926555 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106741573034 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168539325843 0.00437022459523 386% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00561797752809 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 946.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.9 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94968553459 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37106918239 0.337110787985 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295597484277 0.247514529752 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176100628931 0.171178102325 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0943396226415 0.112407865282 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56191863251 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 51.3765909845 49.3433353143 104% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6570009706 42.9750493124 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 52.274034142 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.55555555556 2.94281807926 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420212750298 0.418131533498 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173637805722 0.181151798455 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0495542584113 0.0850326197045 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.760637212264 0.706616315825 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194763865186 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233400107447 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626154239713 0.108899403657 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261640291563 0.367819155151 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0158643903032 0.0812612215331 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286350036904 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571627407512 0.0921553760075 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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