The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diageam reveals who the brick made in manufacturing for the building industry.
Overall, it clearly seen that they are seven steps to made the brick. The brick made by clay and
Firstly, the materiels that it used to take the mud is digger. digger used to drigling and take the mud from the earth. Secondly, they put the mud on the metel grif to seperate the impurities, after that, mud the it clear get down in roller to mix with sand and water. Thirdly, there are two ways to shape the brick, first way is to wire cutter, other way is to put the mud in mould. Both way lead to shape the brick.
fourthly, after shape the brick. it placed in drying oven from day or two days. after brick drought, it put to oven at 200 C to 980 C and then incresingly the height to reach 1300 C. then, put it in cooling chamber from two days or three day. Lastly, the brick is ready to packaging to delivery.
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 65
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 61
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de the brick. The brick made by clay and Firstly, the materiels that it used to ...
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Suggestion:
...The brick made by clay and Firstly, the materiels that it used to take the m...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Digger
...that it used to take the mud is digger. digger used to drigling and take the mud from ...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to seperate the impurities, after that, mud the it clear get down in roller to m...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...perate the impurities, after that, mud the it clear get down in roller to mix with sa...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...the impurities, after that, mud the it clear get down in roller to mix with sand and...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould. Both way lead to shape the brick. fourthly, after shape the brick. it plac...
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Suggestion: Fourthly
... Both way lead to shape the brick. fourthly, after shape the brick. it placed in dr...
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Suggestion: It
.... fourthly, after shape the brick. it placed in drying oven from day or two d...
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Suggestion: After
...ed in drying oven from day or two days. after brick drought, it put to oven at 200 C ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23699421965 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12898891621 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9127761896 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0833333333 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118394164365 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542174014383 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626212743908 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101338285856 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824357483646 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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