The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The flow chart shows the process that is used for building industry to manufacturing bricks.
It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from digging clay to collect it to the eventual production of bricks.
At the first stage in manufacture bricks process, Bulldozer is dug the clay to collect it as a material, clay is a soil material containing clay minerals. This clay is then put in a metal grid to dressing it, dressing clay is improved physical properties if clay and removing impurities, with any impurities that is not useful for manufacturing being removed. Next, the clay is cut to bricks by wire cutter or mould. Stage four and five of the process both involve drying, bricks is put in drying oven from humidity, and kiln it with moderate temperature between 200 and 980 Celsius and then rose the temperature level into 870-1300 Celsius, bricks after that get cooled in cooling chamber for two to three days. Following this, all bricks are collected from cooling chamber and packaged. Finally, bricks are delivered and sold in building industries, which makes the end product: building bricks.
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- The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94210526316 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62960452247 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2921167316 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293625117006 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141447512168 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12714420568 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246459139265 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170920719512 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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