Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion?
There is a big debate about the connection between success and intelligence. Some people argue that success is a factor obtaining from intelligence, while others see the opposite where intelligence is one of the factors of success. In my opinion, intelligence can be measured in various ways. Both of these points of views will be discussed in details in this essay.
Firstly, the majority of people consider intelligent people are successful due to the famous examples in our lives, which make a relationship between success and intelligence. Here are some examples for successful intelligent people Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. These people were well educated and graduated from great institutions. From these examples, people started referring success to intelligence. While others made success without being intelligent in their education like Thomas Edison and Charles Dickens. So it’s not necessary to be intelligent in your school or university to be successful.
In addition to, success can be measured by our income. Earning money sometimes depends on your skills or abilities. It hasn’t been depending on your education degree only. The smart person who can earn money more easily than others. You need think in a creative way to change your life into a successful life. For example, my uncle is not well educated and he has a company for air conditions.
To sum up, intelligence can’t be the only measure for success while It depends on multiple factors. However, we do our best to be smart. To be an intelligent person will open for us lots of opportunities to achieve our goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15708812261 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90606902044 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8124866442 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8421052632 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489635290953 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133140225433 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949001960174 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278288757208 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428552195827 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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