The diagram presents the process of producing smoked fish.
The flow chart indicates several steps of making and selling smoked fish. The first step is to get fresh fish. The workers catch the fish by net and deliver the fish to ports by boat. In ports the fish are frozen by ice and then thaw so they can be washed in fresh water. The second step is cutting open the fish and emptying them. After that, the fish meat will be preserved in salt water until they get yellow coloring.
These several steps provide a good preparation for the next step and also the most important process which is called smoking and in this step fish are smoked by firewood. Then these productions are packed by plastic boxes and frozen again to prevent of deterioration. At last, these smoked fish are stored in cold store and if are needed, they will be distributed by car and sell in fish shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h. The first step is to get fresh fish. The workers catch the fish by net and deliv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46357615894 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14438681381 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7574633389 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24293176941 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106918295665 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579023915816 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198342699911 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00903914034566 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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