the diagram show enivironmental causes by maufactoring process
The diagram depict thecomplete process of manufacturing.Although,it includes whole system of development of new products.which mainly based on consumer feed back.however,the diagram shows construction of consumer goods is recycleable process. This system is many steps including using energy for developmentits packaging distributing and consuming.
Firstly,their development commence with use of resources and energy to construct or produce them.subsequently,their packaging and then distribution occurs.In the next step sales of goods at stores from where users buy it.so,unpackaging of product some of their material despose off as well as other which is recycleable.As a consequence,these reuseable material is again used either as solid matter or as energy at second step of this process.At the last point which is actually first designing and planning of product which is principally based on user feed back.As in the diagram shows the design of car which is developed.therefore,material bought for manufacturing in factory and despersen of resultant product.From where someone bought and consumed.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries electricity production and consumption during 2014. Summaries the information by reporting main features and made comparison where possible 78
- the graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emission per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summaries the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. 73
- Living in a country where you have to peak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.TO WHAT EXTEND TO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE 70
- director of large companies often recieve bigger increase in salaries as in ordanary worker,as employer organisation says that this attract the best talent give your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tory and despersen of resultant product.From where someone bought and consumed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, second, so, then, therefore, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04458598726 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.3704572516 2.65546596893 165% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.307476926 43.030603864 649% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.333333333 112.824112599 280% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 22.9334400587 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.3333333333 5.23603664747 598% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124510563004 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930280453668 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924066732968 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118238661769 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581813531765 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.2329268293 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 61.2550243902 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.3012195122 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.64 11.4140731707 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.06136585366 147% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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