it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music and other are not.however its sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musican.discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Certainly some talents are gifted by birth.It is general perception that some peoples born with specific capabilities while other are not.But sometime its said that teaching children for earlier can become them good at some specific field like sports or music.In this essay we will discuss both side of view and opinion about it.
Although its common concept that each and every person have some in born characteristics.And many researches also sport this fact but important part of any talent is to discover it.In our education system all children are go through same specific educational system their innate talent suppress.and the children who got specific environment become master in that field.Its can be generally observe that children whose parents having specific profession also go in that field.Another factor which is about pressure on children related to noble profession like doctor and lawyers.
However environment and teaching children personality more because sport and music developed with practice and effort.Some people have advantage of beautiful voice and some specific physical character which make superior with other. Meanwhile each and every talent are raw need a specific level of practice.On the other hand only talent can do nothing because many people which have different talent but could not do any noticeable achievement.
In this essay we discussed that talent are either in born or can be taught. According to me only talent cannot do anything specific training and environment matter more.People with less talent perform well through guidance and practice however if that is talented too will leads to extra ordinary performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44787644788 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73351983853 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.068887911 49.4020404114 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.166666667 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1666666667 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278746168434 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153398885359 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109708472601 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1846526731 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110674472971 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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