The diagram show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concete for buildings.
The given diagram chart described the process of making cement and show that, how the cement is used to produce the concrete. The data is calibrated in per centum. It is clear and coherent representation.
Firstly, in the process of cement production , It is the mixture of two main components that is : limestone and clay. This components have been crushed into the machine properly, and making a powder. After that, this powder is mixing in the mixer and rotating in the heater with the normal heat. After heating the powder , grinde it into the grinder. Finally , when the cement is ready then it packed into the bages.
On the other hand , in the process of concrete production, we need to mix four components, these are cement (15%), water (10%), sand (25%), and gravel (50%) mixing into the concrete mixer and then the concrete is ready.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...tly, in the process of cement production , It is the mixture of two main component...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...omponents that is : limestone and clay. This components have been crushed into the m...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been crushed into the machine properly, and making a powder. After that, this po...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he normal heat. After heating the powder , grinde it into the grinder. Finally , w...
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Suggestion: ,
...er , grinde it into the grinder. Finally , when the cement is ready then it packed...
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Suggestion: ,
...acked into the bages. On the other hand , in the process of concrete production, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46165256146 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5165082016 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255915297496 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094961124772 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162246346891 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192222479945 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159316853627 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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