The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
The illustration demonstrates the different steps about chocolate.
Overall, it is man-made cyclical process which has ten stages to produce chocolates from starting with cocao tree and ending with liquid chocolate.
It is vividly seen that cocao trees are grown in America, Africa and Indonesia. Once, The red pods are ripped it is harvested and white cocao beans have to be fermented in a large container. Before putting into large sacks it has to be spread in the sun to for drying. Afterwards, it has been delivered to its factory by train or lorry. In the next stage, the beans are roasted in 350 Celsius. In the second last stage beans have to be crushed and outer shells are removed. Finally, liquid chocolate is produced by pressing the inner part.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 633.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86923076923 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54224659533 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8553509853 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0428280136972 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0162398047472 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318697565779 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0264141374172 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215000865095 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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