The figure shows how the fruits are preserved and it involves 14 steps.
The first step involves collecting the fruits by hand after which they are transported by a truck to the washing area, where they are washed and checked for quality which involves a check for presence of blemishes on fruit and stored in cold conditions at a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a machine with a weight in it and then, they are pealed and sliced to place the bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at high temperature. To avoid confusion, the cans are labelled with the image of that particular fruit and dispatched by a truck to the place where they are to be sent.
To conclude, the canning of fruit is a simple process which even can be done at home but requires some extra care.
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opin 56
- Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- The diagram below illustrates how sugar is made from raw sugar cane Write a report for a university lecturer that describes this process 54
- the diagram below shows the process of maple syrup production 56
- Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44585987261 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41481088599 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3981409481 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164551708606 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909516075578 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373775978943 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119052235038 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378298404022 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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