The figure shows how the fruits are preserved and it involves 14 steps.
The first step involves collecting the fruits by hand after which they are transported by a truck to the washing area, where they are washed and checked for quality which involves a check for presence of blemishes on fruit and the cans are allowed to cool at a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a machine with a weight in it and then, they are pealed and sliced to place the bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at high temperature using a special heating process. To avoid confusion, the cans are labelled with the image of that particular fruit and dispatched by a truck to the place where they are to be sent.
To conclude, the canning of fruit is a simple process which even can be done at home but requires some extra care.
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- Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while other thinks this is role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t a temperature below 0 degree celsius. The fruits are then weighed and graded in a...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he bits of sliced fruit in a small can. The can is then sealed and sterilised at hi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42682926829 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36406142827 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5187051029 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169842132355 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927577627001 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375887244594 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121684319718 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384609222249 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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