The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram depicts the procedure of generating electricity by geothermal power plant.
Generally, there are 5 distinct steps, beginning with the cold water and ending with the convey electricity through high tension pole.
At the first phase, cold water flows to the injection well which is 4,5 kilometres in length, followed by the travel through the Geothermal zone containing high-temperature rocks prior to being pumped up through the production well having similar length to the former to the ground wherein the condenser was placed. Afterwards, the cold water which is under the form of steam rotates the turbine to produce energy for powering the generator to produce electricity.
It is noticeable that after being generated, electricity is transmitted from the Geothermal Power plant to accommodations through networks of wire carried by poles.
To sum up, the electricity making process consists of several steps from the cold water which is the only raw material in the procedure, through the process in underground and go back to the ground.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing with the cold water and ending with the convey electricity through high tension pole. ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35329341317 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9042842136 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.387245982 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825446186995 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492738405203 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455573001972 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456667688615 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350004174702 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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