The diagram shows how paper is made from trees

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how paper is made from trees.

The flowchart beneath proclaims how paper is produced from trees.

Overall, the process have 7 stages. In the beginning the chips are used as a raw material to give output as paper bales and paper rolls.

Firstly, we can see the chips can be formed by logs from the trees or it can be purchased from the market. After this, chips goes to the digester. Digester converts chips into pulp which is washed and then pulp is screened as clean pulp that could be used for two purpose.

Owing to this, primary purpose is to manufacture the pulp bales. Moreover clean pulp goes to the pulp former followed by the pulp drier. From the dried pulp, pulp reel is formed which is then cut in several pieces to form pulp bales.

Furthermore, the secondary purposes to generate paper rolls for printing. For this, the clean pulp is dried first and then passed to the presser where pulp is transformed into paper and then goes to the drier where it finally gives output product as paper rolls.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stly, we can see the chips can be formed by logs from the trees or it can be purc...
^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...rpose is to manufacture the pulp bales. Moreover clean pulp goes to the pulp former foll...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61931818182 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17926430787 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3023522032 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14296279965 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068748259867 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102968650491 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127126121013 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123834598365 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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