The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town is collecting rainwater and further using it for drinking purposes.
Overall, the whole process tells us about the treatment of rainwater with filters and chemicals and later used
for consumption.
Initially, the rainwater which falls on the rooftop is collected by the gutter and then runs down the pipe
at the side of the house into the drain at the bottom. Each dwelling place accumulates the stormwater in this manner and
rainwater is passed along the underground drains to the water filtrate.
In water filter rainwater is treated and all the impurities are removed. Once, it is filtered, it continues
along the pipe to a storage tank. From this point, water goes from storage tank to water treatment.At this stage
it removes all the chemicals from water and is ready for consumption.After the water is cured it travels along the pipe
that led to the accomodation in the town where people can use it for daily consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll, the whole process tells us about the treatment of rainwater with filters and ...
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...ith filters and chemicals and later used for consumption. Initially, the rainw...
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...y the gutter and then runs down the pipe at the side of the house into the drain ...
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...ulates the stormwater in this manner and rainwater is passed along the undergroun...
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...ities are removed. Once, it is filtered, it continues along the pipe to a stora...
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...ved. Once, it is filtered, it continues along the pipe to a storage tank. From t...
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...es from storage tank to water treatment.At this stage it removes all the chemical...
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...from water and is ready for consumption.After the water is cured it travels along the...
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...water is cured it travels along the pipe that led to the accomodation in the town...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82963622502 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5476149126 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393039454764 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179696127629 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207171382049 0.0843802449381 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15843546847 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186133357883 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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